Really nicely done Maura. You might want to consider some variations on "reminds me of" as in
His touch is like gentle wind
Though his hands are as rough as bark
His voice is sweet honey...

so that you have similes and metaphors

Just a thought, but nicely done just the same.

Wow, this poem inspired me! Its short but it has so much potential and talent within it. You're an excellent writer! Keep up the good work. I gave it a 5/5. I'd also LOVE it if you'd read some of my poems and comment/rate them. Thanks!!
Rachel