The idea or the sound on your expressions seems to be quite charming. tt's always my pleasure to read line by line carefully on all what you try to narrate. itt might take minutes to get its real emotion,. your expressions and its wave is a charismatic one. 'GOOD' Feel better and write more, inform me of any new, and I will take interest deeply without any hesitations dear.

Very Beautiful And Sweet.
LOVE IT!!

Keep up the beautiful writing.

I think this was actually more of a love poem, I didnt find it very amusing. Although it was excellently written i thought you focused too much on the rhyming couplets, it took away some of the nice vocabulary that you used. Well done though. Good job.

Great and wonderfully expressed