Hey
good poem. Its kinda complicated to understand but if u reread it u get it lol. Well keep up the good work and if u have time plz comment some of my poems: they were meant to be part 1 &2

~mary~

Yeah I agree with Mary, this poem is atcually pretty complicated to understand....I think it would do with some work, just to make it a bit clearer...... but I understand the message, and probably everyone else who reads this will to, because it is easy to tell what you're on about...but not so easy to follow....
and this poem is atcually pretty true for me, makes me feel a bit like trash...but i guess that's what i should feel to some degree..

I love it so far

Wonder who this is about.....??