This was really honest and heartfelt , but could use a little work - some more indenting, rhythm, and maybe repitition of the occasional word (for emphasis) would make it a little less like prose

Thats a realllllllllly really goodp oem you got going on here full of heartfelt emotion and pain loved it xxx alex xxx

Love it i can relate

Great again

Will I ever you again?"
^This line i think you're missing a word.

Aww I"m so sorry for your lost.
Very sweet but sad poem.
LIttle advice..try and use stanzas
just helps the poem with flow and
usually keeps it looking good.
5/5
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<3Tay

R.I.P. SHADOW

MIZZ YA HOLMES!