Comments : TO JORGE "SHADOW" GONZAGA (85-06)

  • 16 years ago

    by claire

    This was really honest and heartfelt , but could use a little work - some more indenting, rhythm, and maybe repitition of the occasional word (for emphasis) would make it a little less like prose

  • 16 years ago

    by Choose xX Alex Xx Life

    Thats a realllllllllly really goodp oem you got going on here full of heartfelt emotion and pain loved it xxx alex xxx

  • 16 years ago

    by Munequita

    Love it i can relate

  • 16 years ago

    by Polaroid

    Great again

  • 16 years ago

    by BeautifulxMess

    Will I ever you again?"
    ^This line i think you're missing a word.

    Aww I"m so sorry for your lost.
    Very sweet but sad poem.
    LIttle advice..try and use stanzas
    just helps the poem with flow and
    usually keeps it looking good.
    5/5
    2/5
    <3Tay

  • 16 years ago

    by L0V3 Mi fAMilY

    R.I.P. SHADOW

    MIZZ YA HOLMES!