Aww...that's adorable. I mean, someone else could have made that really cheesy, but you didn't. You gave it a touch of something special and it just made the piece so sweet and loving. I especially enjoyed the last stanza.
Charisma*

How sweet! Corny... but sweet!

I found it so cute, right from the beginning to the very last line!

_Sam

This is so sweet.
I loved the imagery you portrayed in this piece.
The flow was perfect throughout and I loved the last stanza, it was beautifully wrapped up.