Love your work, you could improve much (Capitalize I) and if you continue writting you could write really good stuff. 4/5

So short and said so much. Very cute! It's perfect! Forget the capitalize "I" !!! you have the right to slack a little! *smiles* 5/5

Wel am new to dis and i dnt write perfect all da time, minor ting!

Really nice poem tho 5/5

Thats good...you should never let go of sumthing as percious as your mom...great poem=D

I agree with everything everyone said above. It may be a short and simple poem but it tells a story about your mother in some way. God Bless xxxxxx Much Love from Roxy xxxx