Please comment, I'm ery proud of this poem and so I ould use some praise

Could , not ould en very not ery:)

Your poem is very good! I love itt!!
Your end makes your poem versy strond. as ussual
Love you
Cooolkind;)

Nice poem,especially the end "Your smile is killing me
But that's the way I'd like to die"!
Doe zo voort mijn boeleken!:)

xx Elien

You should be very proud of it.

Lovely :-)

This explains exacatlly how i feel
but really good jobb=]