Yeah a sad poem but full of hopes and courage that one day you'll regain and win back what was once gone.. i like the set up and how you end the last stanza. although it's not so powerful, you still manage to make it a flawless poem.. good work!!

It was an amazing poem, darling. I felt it could have been longer, because . . . it was missing something?

What was there though, was amazing. Great emotion. PERFECT flow, and great rhyming. You did a wonderful job, hun.

Keep it up.
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