Wao!!
Absolutely Marvelous.. the starting was awesome.. pulled the reader in...Great great great..
and the ending was just as much mesmerizing.. great skill shown here , my friend.. keep up the good work

~Wake~

Wow... another one breathtaking piece from you. You have true talent for describing emotions. This piece touched me in so many ways. It holds superbly expressed feelings and I can deeply relate to some parts of it. The topic that you picked is also great, and you wrote amazing, unique piece, truly captivating.