"..I remember the day that I met you
I was total mess
Had my hair totally the wrong way
My clothes was just not right
But even so
You saw beyond my soul and into my heart.."

i loved this piece of yours.. im sure alot of ppl will relate to this.. Great work..
a really passionate yet at turns, heartbreaking write

"..To me you seem so perfect..
..That I'm afraid it's all an illusion.."

superbly penned piece this.
Keep up the good work

~Wake~

I love this poem...it really relates to really life...5/5

ps-thanks for rating my poem...maybe sometime u will get time to read some of the others i have written :)