Okay...this is beautiful.
I loved how you used both sides of the poem to spell out the title, it was original and unique.
Flow was good throughout, and again, despite being somehwhat short, the emotion and depth were beautifully done.
Loved the ending, nicely done.
As always, beautifully and elegently written.

Your very talented, I love the way you write...beautiful flow and enjoyable to read.

Interesting poem, you used this form on the great way. I also like rhythm of it and it is very emotional. It seems that you really know how to write short but powerful poem. Well done!