Comments : Living this lie

  • 16 years ago

    by Sapphire

    This is a really well written poem. It describes how most of us all feels at times. I look foward to more of your writing.

  • 16 years ago

    by Christina

    Thanx I'll have to read some of yours.

  • 15 years ago

    by Montgomery

    Your poem is an inspiration to me and all who have felt your feelings. I believe most of us have been in that place of aloneness you write so poignantly about. You are not alone anymore. Thanks a bunch.

  • 15 years ago

    by CanUKissAwayMyPain

    I have but until I get the courage
    to tell this person how I feel
    I will go on through this life
    living this LIE I call life.

    This was my favorite part. it says sooo much. and i can relate to it very much. and i love it. the flow was nice. the words u choice were amzing. Great Job Keep it up.

    TaKe CaRe,
    Frenchy