Wow.
words fail me.
excellent.
x

"Let's take a walk on the twenty-fifth hour
singing a lullaby to ease the excruciating pain,
echoing distantly
upon a crippled and tainted romance;
my whispers impregnated by hatred.
Let's pick at the buffets of naughty smiles,
swallowing whole; the remnants of a heartwrenching past.
But tonight I will still kiss the pillow,
where your head once rested."
^^^
I love that stanza.
I'm putting this poem in my favorites it's amazing.
Perfect imagery and wording.
5/5
-Heather

You have a gift your wording and expressions everything! it was beautiful!
5.5!