Iz my keekee barney in love???? n e wayz its great! loved it!!!!

I liked it, but your old ones are wayy better..
this one just didn't get to me, its good that ur getting back to it again but i say this one is not your best..
Never stop writing though!!

Keep smiling =)

Yay ur writing again...

love the poem its very well done and sweet :)
i find it different from some of the others but its really good

ashleigh

I liked it so I guess that's good:S:S Depending on what you think of moi I guess but you have my vote on it's being good I like it I like that your writting again too!

What up K. nice poem; I'm sorry dat I haven' t been on in a while, but I can only use the internet in school when I can. Keep up the good work!

Im not entirely sure on how I feel about this poem. All your poems are good, it's just this particulary peice reads like you just wrote it to write it.
It like a shell with out the egg; empty.
I think if you used more description, and added to it, the poem would improve.

Still a good write though,
4/5

Thank you for reading it to me, Keenan. :]
Always,
Miss Charlotte.