Comments : Imaginary Memories

  • 16 years ago

    by DeadandBleeding

    This is really good, i like the imagery, the paper and razor blades, the ash and closing doors, so compelling.

  • 16 years ago

    by CourtneyLouxxx

    I get some really scary thoughts from this hope
    im praying its fiction...

    im always here x

  • 16 years ago

    by chavii

    Samantha, this poem is really moving.Such depth in words, a overhwhelming feeling comes in reader's mind.Very few are capable of it.

    Keep writing
    chavii.

  • 16 years ago

    by Cindy

    Sam
    How I have missed reading your poetry. What a sad piece. Brings tears to the eyes.

    For all this prose can no longer be imaginary,
    It's the life in which I live,
    Death almost seems the present,
    I wish for you to give.

    These lines really touched my heart.
    Take care
    Love Cindy

  • 16 years ago

    by End Of Eternity

    Wow...very powerful write indeed..i missed all ur poems..its been so long...and am glad that u r still posting....keep them coming

    all the best and take care

  • 16 years ago

    by debbylyn

    So sad....to lose one and be left with only memories...this is a very moving piece....the emotion and longing are evident in every verse...

    "So slowly I turn to ash,
    The cold black winter even turns away,
    I used to be my own protection,
    But not now as night becomes day,"

    ^ This is excellent.....the "ash" of a spent relationship....love the Winter metaphor....

    Really enjoyed this heartfelt and beautiful poem from you....take care, Debbie