That was very good wish i could write like that lol

Excellent work on this, it paints a very vivid picture in ones mind and creates a calming atmosphere...you were very descriptive and it didnt need to be crammed with metaphors, great work! 5/5

andrew

I think i've got a poem against this in one of the contests, i read it in the contest post and didn't fancy my chances. I've re-read it again and things are looking bleak for my poem. :)
This is a very good poem, choice of wording is excellent. Sets such a serene scene for the reader.
Only one slight things marks this down for me ..
The last line "Boheme" to the best of my knowledge, is pronounced BoHem so throws off the rhyming structure a bit on the last line.

I still don't fancy my chances against this poem though.

Good work. [5/5]

Il est tres bon,
love the flow and your choice in wording was great,
the title captured my full attention,
i give it a perfect 5/5!!!
keep them coming!!!!

There were some very creative lines but there were also some that were cliche.
Try to avoid this because it takes away the beauty and emotion of the poem.

:)
keep writing

That was so beautiful!!!! i really loved. very nice choice of words and really descriptive. perf.5

A beautiful piece of poetry. The imagery was so vivid, I could picture everything in my mind. The flow was flawless and your word usage was magnificent.

"The whistles of the wind, wrap a blanket of love.
This is the angel, who was sent from above."

^ Simply beautiful. A lovely write. Overall: 5.5 :]]

-- Stephanie Lynn .+.

Nice poem i love the ryhming on this piece...sorry for late vote and comment...5/5 ^_^

This poem confused me just a bit

*yells*
background check please

i want to know what or who (no names needed) inspired you to write this
might help

i though i was good but confusing. sorry

This was very whimsical and was heart felt there were places that it seemed choppy but over all a good write. Plot121

Ohh love the move/musical Rent. Love Love Love. I love your rhyming. And just the way you put everything. I just find it relaxing.

~Ashley