Aww, some of this is like... really really good. other parts were okay, but they could have been better. not bad. =]

This is really good! love it! 5/5

You have a way of writing that makes you read it again and again. I can't ever get enough of your work! This poem wasnt as good as other but it was still amazing and full of emotion.
=D Keep writing!!
~!~ VaNiLLa PaiN ~!~

I liked this. it was interesting and i do like it,
katrina

That was just like amazing, no joke.

Loved it..
-- meggin