Comments : A Broken Angel

  • 16 years ago

    by HOLLYWOODxBANGBANG

    Awehh. Cute. I love it. And a very good recovery from writers block ;]

    "Fairy-tales aren't meant to be true,
    And happiness is just a dream,
    This pain is too hard to subdue,
    Time stands still for her it seems."

    ^^ LOVE that stanza. Great job cutie.

    5.5
    :]

  • 16 years ago

    by Hillstar123

    I love this poem.