This poem was also very good, 3rd I';ve read of yours so far.
I don't have anything new to say than the other comments I've left for praise, so I'm going to provide a bit of critism.
This peom was beautifully written, but there was something about it that couldn't quite hold my attention as well as the other two.
Also, I've noticed you have the same tendensy I do, that you pick a style/flow and write everything following it (like I said, I've only read three, could be wrong). Although I must admit, it works really well for you.
4/5

I'm so glad u entered my conteeeeest! U made a great poem, and i noticed that you are a good poet, also a relative new one. Keep on writing! Muie molestatei de tac-su. Kissez!