Very good poem and realy interesting, i wish you more tallents
good time and check my poem alsso

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Good work

Wow a great poem, the emotion in it was wonderful. keep up the good work.
5/5

I liked this one. this is how I feel sometimes. and even though I've had to drop some tears before, the hurt is still there. and sometimes I want to cry about what happened but I can't for some reason. it's annoying and complicated. but this one of yours I thought was good. good stuff. =)