Comments : IM TOSSING AND TURNING

  • 16 years ago

    by TotaMariee

    Good poem,excellent rhyming 5/5 :)

  • 16 years ago

    by mahfoudh

    As I look
    Beyond the ripples of my reflections
    To examine my inner self;
    The ripples begin to fade . . .
    As the reflection lays beside me
    Grasping my hand,
    The inner warmth shields me
    And the vision of my reflection appears
    I see you. My Friend.
    thank u vry much 4 coment me

  • 16 years ago

    by xxSuicidalxx

    Very good peom! Keep up the good work...