Keep up the good work, hon. I'm really into your poem. 8)

LOVED this poem! It had a great rhyme and flow to it. But the 2nd to last stanza was off in flow from the rest of the poem. I like the desperation the piece has from the very beginning! Good job!
Charisma*

I can't breathe alone

^That line really shows the desperation and need the person has for their other half. It's really great. It shows their like your oxygen and life isn't the same without them. Great poem! Really enjoyed it!
*ME*