Comments : Fly to me

  • 16 years ago

    by debbylyn

    Such a beautiful love poem.....really romantic and not a bit cliche....this stanza is excellent:

    Picking me up where lust left me lying
    Romantically sharing only truth
    The rain is pouring on a heart that is crying
    And your only intention is to sooth

    Nicely done....enjoyed it.....All the best, Debbie