This poem was no exception to the other. it has a strong message and it still holds strong as a poem.
5.5 again
i love your abstract and creative mind.

I loved this..i found it to be both original and unique in concept. the wording and flow were perfect throughout the entire piece and the imagery you portrayed in this was wonderfully done it created very vivid pictures in my mind..elegantly written.

This was an excellent poem to read. 5/5

I love the uniqueness of this, the use of language really works, it presents such a strong message so well.
DnB

The concept of this was unique and had much meaning behind it. I really enjoy poetry like that, as I did this piece. The only critique I'd give is that if you are going to rhyme a poem, have the rhyme scheme the same the whole way through. It seemed as if you were trying to rhyme, but the only verse that actually did was the middle one. Other than that, a great job on an original concept. :]

Tammie

I loved it, you really put into words what parents are, i usta hate mine and then i became one and you realize why they said it all. nicely written, very unique. 5/5

nikki

Hmm. The poem started out shaky for me with the flow kinda off but the ending was strong. Again great word usage but I give it a *4/5*