This poem is so true.
i love how abstract some parts are it makes you REALLY think.
I look forward to reading more of these poems.
5.5

This was well written, the flow was flawless, the word choice again was amazing, you did wonders with the vocab, and again the images are clear, Your words show depth, and the topic is intresting. great job 5/5

I like this one even better than the other..you managed to pack so much say emotion and depth in this piece, all the time holding the reader captivated..beautiful ending, a perfect way to wrap the piece up.

This is a poem unlike anything I've seen before! I wish I could write like this. 5/5

This is so good. I love the depth of description you use, it makes this piece so powerful. you managed to fit so much into so little as well, superb job
DnB

Wow!! among all the poem i've read i must i love this one, the meaning were really deep, nice words were chosen perfectly ( that helps create a smooth and nice ambiance of this poem).. noh nga ba ulet meaning nitoh?? waah joke lng..

I love the concept of this. It's very original, which is refreshing to read. The flow was flawless, and the short stanza's said so much for what they were. To me, there isn't all that much emotion in this, yet it was still excellent. I can't find a fault at all. Well done. 5/5 from me.

Tammie

Loved the concept of this. the meaning of it was real deep, the words you used were perfect and i absolutely loved it. nice work 5/5

nikki

This was a very original and abstract piece. I enjoyed the word usage and the imagery you created. Well done *5/5*

Ahh I loved thouse discriptions and thouse lines just flowed so perfectly. Deep poem, you really know how to touch with your words. And specialy loved the ending!
5/5 Keep up!

Catchy little rhymes you had in this poem. It sort of brings me back to my highschool days where I would have to do a hypothesis for science labs. Gah, I did not like science much. I also like the fact that you brought it into your life. Crazy how life can be sometimes. Never really have it figured out.