Comments : The Real Me

  • 15 years ago

    by RobinAnn13

    Only issue I see is this stanza:
    When you see of
    what I really am,
    Please don't run away,
    cause I trusted you.
    And I let me walls fall down.

    In the last line I'm assuming you meant my not me...? And the first line confuses me, otherwise this poem was really really good.

    I loved how you started out using all questions and then started talking.

    My FAVORITE part was definately third stanza, the reference to a book. Awesome is all I have to say about that.
    5/5