Comments : Saved (by your screams)

  • 16 years ago

    by Jenni Marie

    "I will erase your dreams.
    Saved. "

    ^^Holy crap...BEAUTIFUL.

    What a beautiful ending to such a marvouselly written piece.

    The imagery in this is breathtaking. Coupled with the content, concept, flow and wording, it all comes together to create a truly beautiful read.