Aww tht was a really beautiful love poem. very well written keep it up. xx

To make me happy
And make me smile,
The one I'd do anything for -
Go the extra mile.

You are my everything.
How can I not believe this is true?
Without you I'd be nothing.
Yeah, I'd be NOTHING without you!

these 2 are my favorite stanzas... the reason for the 4 i rated it
you're an awesome poet and have a lot of emotion
keepit up
tim

For u its a beautiful love poem but for me its a bit sad because of all the love I've found and lost.

PS: its still a awesome poem.

Cheers