Being in love is like a special project of ur life that takes all of ur attention, all of ur heart, and brain, so it really need power to keep the love alive until the two lovers will meet forever.then u get the realise and joy of being in love.
a very true and greatly written poem. you are talented...
keep it up and a 5/5 from me as you truly deserve it

Your word choice was simple yet effective, the flow was great, and the emiton heartfelt. The only thing I could see room for improvement is you shouldn't take so many shortcut u should be you it looks more professional, just a suggestion 5/5