Comments : The Only Way

  • 14 years ago

    by Pete

    1 main thing ...
    (apologies for caps i want to shout it)

    I LOVE THIS POEM!

    This has been voted for as a 4 ... INSANITY!

    This isn't just a message direct from the heart of the writer - it (should) touch the heart of every single reader! This is about more than a single person .. this is a message to everyone that has been in a relationship that they shouldn't be in or couldn't get out of! I changed all the his to her etc.. for obvious reasons. This poem resonates in the very core of anyone who's wanted out of a relationship.
    Beautifully penned.
    Marvelously written.
    Amazing topic.
    Billiant read.
    Nuff said!
    [6/5] << No Typo
    ~Pete.

  • 14 years ago

    by Pete

    I got carried away and forgot to say ..

    "If you second guess yourself, you'll sink."

    Amazing line!

    Ok I'll shut up now.
    Another awe inspiring poem Charisma.

  • 14 years ago

    by Jenni Marie

    "above his influence she must rise" <-- oh how i adored that line right there. so much emotion and depth. i thought the flow was a little off in some places but you certainly made up for that with the overall piece. this was a beautiful heartfelt write and i enjoyed every bit of it.