Comments : Dawn's Highway

  • 16 years ago

    by njabulo b

    Mmh! nice love poem and i imagine all the content, your poem is expressed good and flows nicely, if im loced in a heart of some1 i love, i also feel like im at home- marvellous poem

  • 16 years ago

    by chavii

    Cindy, this is such a beautiful heart warming poem on love, almost like fairytales love we all imagine in our lives.Loved it lot :)

    Take care
    chavii.

  • 16 years ago

    by Ingrid

    Into your arms I melt, forever for you to hold.. awww, so sweet! I love this poem!

    You are a great writer, Cindy!
    Take care my friend,

    5/5 Ingrid

  • 16 years ago

    by Liz

    I missed you and your poems! This is truly beautiful. The last stanza was amazing. The whole thing was amazing. No other way to say it.. Heh. I loved it. 10/10!

    Love always,
    ` Liz =]

  • 16 years ago

    by Gasttlee

    The imagery is so beautiful to me it comes to life! It breathes poetry in every way! 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by dora

    Aww cindy that was so beautiful. i really liked reading this. beautifull worded - great job keep it up. xx

  • 16 years ago

    by Bryan

    Twas wondering where you went cindy, been awhile since ive read one of your poems, the flow tis perfect, i give it a 5/5!!! keep them coming!!!

  • 16 years ago

    by End Of Eternity

    Welcome sweetie, so exactly after a month u hv found ur groove.. :o) this is really such a nice piece. i feel so good realizing that atleast u r still writing and growing with every theme. so many times even i feel like writing one but i simply go blank.....eagerly waiting for the direction which i get only from u...waiting for another collab.

    keep writing dear...u r my inspiration.

    love

    all the best and take care

  • 16 years ago

    by BlueDreams

    First of all, Sorry maybe I'm too late, but better than i forget...Cindy dear, what a lovely poems you penned here, Absolutely beautiful....so heartfelt write. to love and be loved, this would be great......anyway, I'm gladly you come back....Bless you. take care.

    Bert.

  • 16 years ago

    by June

    A beautiful poem very well written ,loved it.Hope your well ,take care.

  • 16 years ago

    by Tara Kay

    This was so sweet, beautifully written. Have missed your work and glad you are now better.
    Such a great piece
    Love Tara-Kay
    x

  • 16 years ago

    by debbylyn

    Beautiful Cindy....from start to finish...a truely romantic love poem....amazing!

  • 16 years ago

    by Boy

    With the morning sunlight
    Oranges, blues and golds
    Into your arms I'll melt
    Forever for you to hold

    my favourite stanza. i loved it. great work. take care.5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by C Cattaway

    I can't pick any one verse.. The whole poem is filled purely with love. You are amazing to express it with each and every word. Well done. xx

  • 16 years ago

    by Chelsey

    Beutifully short and sweet Cindy! I love how you can whip up something and it can turn into a wonderful piece!!!
    Chels

  • 16 years ago

    by Lithium

    Aanother heart warming piece my dear simply magical xox sam

  • 16 years ago

    by Gizmo

    Beautiful :]

  • 16 years ago

    by Elapsed

    An absolute magical write.. well done Hun.. keep them coming :)

  • 16 years ago

    by Andrew Morton

    Nice to see one in this category, great work cindy, keep it up!

    andrew

  • 16 years ago

    by StormyStar

    AWH! i love this its so good! you have great talent! 5/5