That was amazing. it was fast and sorta short, but it was really gorgeous and like perfect!
the flow was like so very strong and your word choice was really good. 5/5
gabriella

I liked this poem. Your use of rhyme was impressive and I liked the rhythm of it. Yes it was short, but any more would have overstated the case. It simply was not needed. Very good.

Love it! Very good peom, flowed beautifully and the choice of wording was really good! Keep up the good work!

Simple, direct and beautiful! 5/5

Wow...you're really trying to tear me up here, aren't ya? lol. again, this is beautifully and elegantly written. a beautiful powerful opening with each stanza thereafter just getting better and better. imagery painted once again created very vivid pictures for me. that ending...awesome. such intensity that it hits the reader like a slap in the face. i can clearly see you have talent...beautifully written.

This is incredible. And if you had a fan club i would def join.5/5 = )

Cory

I feel so emo now... :[ lol...jk...but seriously, that was deep! i love your poetry! you are a very talented person:]

~My Name Is Jini, BUT My Friends Call Me FRANK~

Oh wow that was terribly sad yet beautiful ^^Lovey job, it flowed perfectly all the way through and the heading was perfectly matched to the poem XD

This is absolutely beautiful. It's formatted in a very unique style and the rhyming scheme is fantastic. Stunning piece. Great job!