Comments : Emotionless Emotions.

  • 16 years ago

    by Teria

    "where your going," << you're.
    "your still mine." << you're.

    "It stares back saying....
    "Fill me with your words; I dare you""
    ANNNNDDD.
    "Blank paper, I have won,
    For you are not blank anymore...
    Your filled with my emotionless emotions."

    AMAZING AMBER.
    Amazing, no joke. I loved it. At first I thought I wouldn't. Usually the whole no stanza thing doesn't appeal to me because it seems like a bunch of jumbled thoughts. Forgive me for judging thogh. IT WAS AMAZING.

    I loved it.
    I think, I loved it so much because I can relate 100% to this. And, so can many many other poets.

    Amazing.
    Kiu. (: