Wow.
this really does tell a story, i love the way how you managed to keep the rythm flow with the story, it's really very descriptive and understandable as well, which i really love about it cause you just don't want to stop reading it.
5/5
gabriella

This was pretty good. I liked that it had a lot of emotions and then she seemed stronger in the end

The poem was great it showed alot of feeling

I like a lot this poem
Congratulations,you have done a great work
Take good care of you
Best regards,Michelle xxx
5/5 for sure
*hugs*

This poem is so about you i bet anyways <3
if you were my homework which is my bible i'd slam you on this desk and do you all night ^.~