Excellent poem with a new creative style followed and the poetic power and quality depicted. If you would like my suggestion, I would like to suggest you to keep the verses in stanzas like

I try to think of the perfect poem to express my emotion
But nothing in words can describe my hearts devotion.

Then it would be well structured I feel :)

Tc 5.5
Fsams

The perfect poem...
the title sure fits ;)
this one is really sweet...

isabel

THIS IS SO THE PERFECT POEM!
THIS IS EXACTLY WHAT HAPPENS TO ME!
OMG!
I love it!!
whoa 100/5, for sure! You wrote it with great flow and awesome word choice!