Wow, what an exellent poet i have in my club (proud face). This was a fantastic piece of art :D well written xxx alex xxx

You should go to

http://www.poems-and-quotes.com/discussion/list.html?topic_id=1453

and request people read your poem, and you will read theirs its great publicity for your poem xxx alex xxx

^^ thanks!

Wow. this is really good, the story in it (lols)
is really strong and understandable, yet you can still tell it is a poem. the flow and wording was really smooth and beautiful.
it was amazing to read.
5/5
gabriella

Wow you're really good. :)

^^ Thank you!

Very nice long one. The words just flow like water... I wish i could make something like this... 5/5

Thanks! ^^

I really enjoyed this poems-It brings out so many feelings at once....Very inspiring