Comments : The Hourglass

  • 17 years ago

    by cory

    That last line was awesome it hit me like a brick.And the rest of its great too.I love your poems keep writing!!= )5/5

    Cory

  • 17 years ago

    by The Queen of Spades

    I really loved the idea behind this poem and the way you phrased it, it was very thought-provoking. The only constructive input I have would be perhaps to make sure to proof-read your work because some phrases were odd such as "have you said the things wish" in the second stanza. Other than that, excellent job!

    ~thequeenofspades~