Comments : My Apologies Piece Of Paper

  • 16 years ago

    by Moon Princess

    Wow. This is an amazing poem. I understand it, but I don't, oh well, at least it kept me intrigued. I love the repetition of that one stanza, and the title fits perfectly. :D Thank-you so much for commenting on my poem.

    Another Crystal Tear Falls

  • You're poems great! i feel the same way sometimes. feeling like you need to let something out but you can't find the word to say. From one beginer to another your poem is great. KEEP'M COMIN'! *Twiggy*

  • 16 years ago

    by damont

    Wow this is a sad poem. i don't no really what to say on it though. its difficult to describe. but keep writing. what inspired it?

  • 16 years ago

    by XxBR0K3NxX

    Ii REALLY ENJOYED READiiNG THiiS POEM. ii FEEL THE SAME WAY A LOT OF THE TiiME. ii LOVED THE REPiiTiiTiiON AND THE WAY iiT FLOWED. GREAT JOB!

  • 15 years ago

    by WaitAutumn

    It was so deep
    and the repeating just amplifies the emotion your trying to put. and as you did so well
    very nice flow throughout.
    5/5 keep writing =P

  • 15 years ago

    by End Of Eternity

    This is surely one of its kind. have never read anything like this, its so unique. Full of sadness yet could keep every reader on the edge of a seat. Beautiful words indeed.
    Loved the repeatation of stanza.

    Great poem

    all the best and take care