Awe!!! How cute!! You are a great writer!!=)

Cute poem

Aww this one is so sweet and again, nice rhyming=)
5/5 keep it up.....Melody....=)

JusT wonderfuL expressionS, excellenT commentS aS showN abovE....... sO alL anD alL youR poeM iS verY mucH cutE....

If you are a start,

I am the End.
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that might be the most romantic line I have ever heard. very good poem

This poem is so good, with nice rhyming, almost every line has a -nd ending.. which I by the way think is difficult to write, so great job.. Keep writing.. I enjoyed reading it.

Wow ! perfect rhyme ! you've got a way with words ! keep it up :)!

Good rhyming! Keep it up!

What a sweet poem. i imagine it to be very difficult to get all or most lines to rhyme in the same rhying scheme.. so good work.
i agree with Crystal, how romantic -
If you are a start,

I am the End.

lovely.
:]

Wow! love it! 5/5