Interesting poem, you expressed emotions greatly. It is very personal and honest, rhyming seems little forced but rhythm of whole piece is excellent.
Well done, 5/5

I like the rhythm if this one, it's very good. Whole poem is filled with emotions that are expressed in a really good way.
My favorite stanza is:

-Who knew one could give his soul
to no longer be whole
to cry every night
left only to be in miserable fright.-

keep up!

This was really good, 5/5
the emotions are so true and easy to relate to, i really liked this piece. it flowed really well and was really honestly written. well done!!

Hey your stuff is pretty good I like the imagination and the way you rhythm things its really unique
Keep up the good work

Your poetry is really good keep it up you have alot going for you

Wow!
this poem is awesome, your really good
i've read a few of yours but this on is my fav so far, AWESOME 5/5.

Wow i can relate,
great work
keep it up!:)