Comments : A New Happiness.

  • 16 years ago

    by Teria

    "I am now going to have a different life story to tell." << I will now have a different life story to tell... ?

    "I'm happy is what I really need to say." << . . . happy, which is how I . . .

    "try and pull me down." < < . . . try to pull . . .

    "Just walk right past for they are my inspiration." << . . . past them, for they . . .

    GASJDHGAKHGASJGD.
    Amber.
    It's amazing, especially the ending. There were a few things [[I thought]] could be worked on, but the poem itself is just outstanding and wonderful. Such a emotion and HOPE going through it.

    I'm glad you found a 'new life' and new happiness.
    It makes me smile. (:

    5/5 Fo Sho.