This was so beautifully written, every line just flowed into the next so perfectly.
loved it
Love Tara-Kay
x

Wow. That was great. Your word choice is amazing. I love how you only repeated certain lines which added an extra something.

The emotion in this peice was deep and I liked that. You kept my attention and your flow was flawless. Great job =))
5/5

Amber..

Okay. I frikken loved this.

This, my dear is just perfect.
I honestly can not find anything wrong with this.

I enjoyed the repetition you used in this, sometimes I think repetition can totally kill a poem, but you managed to pull it of wonderfully here.

The flow, was FLAWLESS. Throughtout the entire piece.

Imagery and wording were beautifully done, as always.

I don't know what else to say, short of, I love this.