Comments : Hypnotic Fingers

  • 16 years ago

    by NyellMoonlight

    Wow... I love this from the beginning to the end, it's so powerful... Your wording is amazing, and the atmosphere that you created... just Wow! This piece is so unique and truly excellently written. This is my favorite one from you.
    My favorite stanza is:

    -Enslaving all beings, The privilege I possess
    An absolute monarchy? A ruler none the less
    The most powerful being gifted with might
    A king in the day, a rebel in the night-
    ^
    So effective!

    Keep up!
    5/5 from me

  • 16 years ago

    by Finalgravedigger

    Wow very nice loved the last stanza 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Blissful

    You are truly talented! You write different styles of poetry with such ease and beauty, that I enjoy each and every one of them.

    This was a different poem for me to read but I really did like it. It was intriguing!

    "A king in the day, a rebel in the night"
    ^powerful sentence!

    *5/5*