WOW.
Sweetie, this was perfect! So flawless, the flow was great throughout and the wording was beautiful.
With love, Tara-Kay

Aww. i love this poem! great job and thanks for the comment :D

It was absolutely perfect, it was flawless, the flow was amazing, and the piece was amazingly thought of, i loved it. 5/5

nikki

5/5 for the flawless imagery and use of metaphores. I like this one and it is very nice. Tc

Fsams

Okay. In all honesty, I didn't like this one to much.

I don't know. I just felt that you could have put more emotion into this..to me, it felt like you were holding back a little.

However, on the other hand, I did love the imagery that you portrayed, it created very beautiful pictures for me.