Comments : When you held me

  • 18 years ago

    by Devon

    Sweet and origianl! 5/5 keep up the good work

  • 18 years ago

    by On Cupids Bad Side

    Aww.. i remember that feeling.

  • 18 years ago

    by Dana

    Love it..its right from the heart..keep up the work=]

  • 18 years ago

    by I - O - W - A

    Amazinly Wrote Well Done

  • 18 years ago

    by denita

    GOOD JOB

  • 17 years ago

    by NyellMoonlight

    Nicely written piece, very emotional.
    You expressed feelings in a good way in the whole poem.
    You should capitalize I and maybe rearrange some lines to create smoother flow, but that's just my opinion.
    All in all, well done.