Wow bryan unlike me you are very skilled at making love poems... this is a very good one I especially loved how you ended it...

Great work I cant find any flaw at all

You make love poems much better than I do! 5/5

Bryan
What a sad poem of love. Excellent job!

Should have seen it from the start,
Knew that he would tear her apart,
Seen his love for her would depart,
Silent Cries Of The Purest Heart.

These lines are so heartfelt.
Take Care Cindy