This is a very good poem!!! :)

I like this poem its really deep

Simple. but full of emotion.
nice flow. :]] 5/5.

Thats really great! It has a lot of emotion and power:) Keep up the great work:)

Again nice write, you are so good with emotion, the flow was a little off in the end, but good job none the less, I really enjoyed it.

Awww...cory! deep, i love it...your emotions are sooooo strong...the flow and the words are wonderful...awww...i love it. keep it up hun! *hug*

Once again you blew me away i love this poem