Ummm
you know when you write a poem even though spelling is not that important, it is important that you use ACTUAL words in your writing.
just a tip for your work.

This is a very cute poem. Very touching as well, the spelling is off in a few of the lines though and you might want to fix that.
Otherwise 5/5 good job

Its great i love it it made me think of someone special to me..=).5/5 keep up the good work.

Thanx for all ur commens there great and thanx forcommenting mi poems x cheesx