Comments : Enchanting Celestial Body

  • 16 years ago

    by Laura

    Oh la la cuddles...i really liked this stanza:
    Enchanting celestial body
    show me what you can do.
    Plague my soul with desires-
    erotic pains of wanting you.

    create a sensual feeling...go girl, go girl!!

  • 16 years ago

    by Domino0792

    I really enjoyed this poem and I believe it was well penned. Great job and keep up the awesome-ness work ... Lol ...