I really liked this poem. It showed a lot of emotion which was good. I liked the repeating line. It threw a nice twist on the poem. You might want to consider punctuation so everyone reads it the way you want them to.
5/5

Great poem.I could really feel the emotions in it.The ryhming was simple yet it fit the poem very nicely.A very enjoyable read.A 5/5.

'you put a wall between us
so you wouldn't see me cry
but hunny should I tell you
you'll have to watch me die'

^^ my favorite stanza =)

Keep writing,
Miranda